Friday, May 25, 2012

The Cruel Torture Of Unrequited Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

I have cried so long, the blood in my veins is now dry.
I have felt so deep a sadness, I cannot remember I ever did smile.
I have screamed so loud in pain and anger, I am deaf though my head is still ringing.
I have become so hopeless, I scoff at the new day and its unwelcome light of dawn.
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Holly Robinson
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Sinjin Tyger 19 January 2013

Well structured. And the end is soooo familiar from school.

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