Friday, November 20, 2015

The Crying Dreamer Comments

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To build a memorial
To survive the ophans
To see them
Sneezing-out happiness
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Ologunde Joshua Abiodun
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Terry Dawson 01 December 2015

I enjoyed reading this poem and I liked the meaning too, if I understood it correctly! Society is in need of improvement, no doubt about it, and it can and will improve if only our hearts change first. The power of a good example can radiate through the hearts of men just as a ripple grows and grows upon the surface of a pond.

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Kevin Patrick 20 November 2015

A powerful work, that both is both sad but hopeful for the future, todays suffering will come to an end, my favorite bit You can be the worlds' face The reality of tomorrow In building a better people Investing in the heart of others Paying the golden price To untamed the beauty in others To reduce their agitation A dream to come Dream to generosity for all No matter the challenges Humanity status and mission Never change Truly Inspirational. Fantastic work

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2015

Reality of tomorrow builds better future. Very interesting poem shared here. Nicely penned.10

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Ologunde Joshua Abiodun

Ologunde Joshua Abiodun

Lagos, Nigeria
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