The Dark Mind Poem by Olanrewaju habeeb

The Dark Mind

Rating: 5.0


When I was born with a fresh mind
In a burkious and rockious determination
Who am I to tell my minded minds
I was distracted by many minds
But I count myself as force

The day my dark mind begins
It was like I am in the forest
But I had to be mindful
Because I make a wrong choice

Who am I going to tell my minded minds
Because I always feel conveyed
And to think of things to make my feeling

Though I was stirred
Because I thought I couldn't do it
But I did it well better

Wednesday, July 21, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: renewed hope
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It's my life about being a poet, many of my friends said im not good at it that I should stop but that doesn't bend me down to stay because I believe in myself and in poet here in Poemhunter. I know you guys will do it for me by rating my poem and critising it. Thanks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 28 July 2021

KEEP GOING U R IMPROVING DON'T LISTEN GIBERISH BUT FOLLOW GOOD NOTES AND POEMS POST

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