Tuesday, November 14, 2006

The Darkening Sun Comments

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Do not judge the world...by its outer appearance

The Sun had blackened
And darkness had spread
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Ryan Joseph Holder
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Christine Woodrich 14 November 2006

Hm...I can't tell if you're an angry Christian or a vengeful Satanist (Aethiest, Agnostic, Luciferian, whatever is prefered) . But I like this poem. When I read peoms I always try to image a picture or video of whats happening in it, and with this I see a sort of coming of the Revelations (though we all know it's already begun) and the end of a war coupled with the beggining of another. I can see the writer walking over corpses and fires burning out. It's vrey mournful. Maybe I got it wrong, but that's what I gathered from the poem.

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