Wednesday, February 10, 2010

The Darkness Comments

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the darkness
filling my senses
as i wander alone
wondering why
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Brandon Nothing 17 May 2010

I like your use of line breaks it adds a cool effect to the poem my favourite being when you say: have i lost all my humanity good stuff.

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