Monday, June 16, 2008

The Darkness Inside Comments

Rating: 5.0

When your emotions are full to the brim
And your mind can't take it anymore
You try to fight back
But you can't win
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Patience Connelley
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Harish K. Thakur 16 June 2008

Connely itsw a brilliant elaboraton of the seemy side of the otherman always there inside..

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Tai Chi Italy 16 June 2008

Wow! this is a real dark poem, I think you will be there past the rotting stage Patience C! but let me tell you, such venom must be purged or you too will rot internally but that is what the title depicts. Writing is so theraputic, keep on writing. Smiling at you, Tai

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Marvin Brato 16 June 2008

As there is light, there is also darkness! The combination of these two oppositions are the very part of human existence. A 10

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