Friday, April 19, 2013

The Day He Stopped Running Comments

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There was a kid who'd run home. Not because he was hungry. But because he was full of fear inside his aching heart hoping his sister had survived to see another day. One time she was about to hang herself from the ceiling of her room, and he barely caught her. He'd wake up in cold sweats and go to her room to make sure she was fine so HE could feel better. He held on helplessly hoping heaven would send an angel down to earth because his feet couldn't run without her.
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Aldrich Suarez 19 April 2013

The Day He Stopped running, you know while reading your poem I can see your soul each letters, I can see how you insert emotions in every words you wrote... I cry, truly I cry when I read this because I imagined true life, discrimination to unlucky, like scorning... well I can conclude that the boy did all his best to incline her sister from death but her sister because of labeling she became lame that cause her to denied her life....what a wonderful story you wrote and unforgettable story you mark on me and to other people who may read this... To accept thy soul will make us away from trouble :) comment ended.

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