Sunday, October 19, 2014

The Day I Died Comments

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The day that she left
I died inside
I haven't felt like that in a while
She laughed and she danced
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Micah Kistler
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

Please visit Keats read Melancholy..when the melancholy feats shall fall, sudden from heaven like weeping cloud ..he suffered with Fenny's love thank you

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Md Asadullah 19 October 2014

Your emotions you've beautifully painted in this poem, welcome to poemhunter.com, :)

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Gajanan Mishra 19 October 2014

stole my heart, very good writing, thanks.

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