Sunday, September 8, 2013

The Death Of A Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gently with both hands
I lifted him up
on his legs and I
taught him to stand
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Alsteine Joi Diapana
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Marvin Brato 29 September 2013

Very good narration of actions, liked it!

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2013

i score it very good...maybe it is better.

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