The Deepest Sleep Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

The Deepest Sleep



The deepest sleep

He had been sleeping deeply
woke up tried to be awake before the sleep
took him into the depth of death.
He struggled to open his eyes, couldn`t.
Knew he had to make it, was able
to put one foot on the floor, the coldness
of the floor made him open his eyes.
He inhaled intensely it had been a close call
had he slept five minutes more
It had been too late.

Sunday, December 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 30 December 2018

Awesome intensity in this poem on near death experience, a truly scary experience I can relate to. Remarkable description, pace, and closing line.

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