Monday, September 17, 2012

The Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here in a desert with water in hand,
The taste is stale and life feels so bland,
Looking through a telescope, see a city, could be a star,
But my legs are too weak to carry me that far.
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Cordell Sundstrom
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Indranil Bhaduri 19 September 2012

Self realisation and taking an oath to move on gaining the mental strength. Loved it.

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