Sunday, December 6, 2009

The Details Comments

Rating: 5.0

one gets too particular about the details of
the morning picture: there are two rainbows
from the top of the galvanized roof of the old house
surrounded by trees
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Estrella Baldemosa 06 December 2009

I love the last stanza too... delicate musing...

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Lady Grace 06 December 2009

'they say that when one gets too lonely the details of the world becomes too visible one can even hear the flapping wings of a butterfly lost inside the room of your heart'...actually i like the flow here..it is matured and poetically arranged....ur right, when ur lonely everything's detailed...but i guess, same emotion when ur happy, it is detailed too...

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