The Dream Poem by Pete O'H

The Dream

Rating: 5.0


i lie awake and dream
the most fantastic reality
ever conceived
--
day is darker than white
and blinding is the night

loud noises | are deafening silence
a scream: an explosion of | quiet

i know (where i am, but i wish to be lost
im trying hard to not find) the way out

i could lock the door, [simply by opening it
but ]ive found the key, and i wish i had i(n) t,

maybe all i have to do
to find, stay, or escape here is
fall a sleep
and stay a
-
wake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 18 May 2006

Now here's a clever poem, masterfully thought out and full of depth, Well done, Love Duncan

0 0 Reply
Leigh A. Hill 18 May 2006

very nice work! one of your best definitly! love always, starr

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success