The Dying Soul Poem by Daniel Mentor

The Dying Soul



I am surrounded by darkness
Empty Hopeless darkness
Everything I think is mocked by everything I do
All day, emptiness and guilt boo
Even a poet cannot tame his own demon

But I need must fight
Life is desirous quite
If it demands artillery I won't spare
Morality or norms won't care
The artillery of my will still lives

Pretty lots of good things I've done
Now the devil in me has all undone
But my dying soul still cries
I don't mind God if chastise
Even Providence knows my Archille's hills

But who is death that I should fear?
He can't dare, my soul is dear
He is nothing but a chance to escape
That freedom it does elate
But the soul, it cannot die

THE DYING SOUL BY DANIEL MENTOR

Thursday, January 26, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,depression,sin,god,weakness,failure,courage,fight,life and death,morality,destiny,fate,free mind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Probably one of Daniel Mentor's most important poem. This is because it tells the tale of the worst days of his life. The tone is that of depression and lost. He was dejected and felt as if everything was working against him. It conveys a message of hope. A sort of encouragement to those who are at the edge of life; to be strong and overcome. The poem is also figuratively rich.
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