The Earth Was Moving Slower Poem by Barbara James

The Earth Was Moving Slower

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The earth was moving slower
it wasn't me there
when they said that mother died.
Echoes upon echoes.
Sorrows never end.

Friday, August 11, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 09 September 2006

Heartfelt sadness, I feel the pain here. Excellent poem Barbara---Melvina

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Tailor Bell 16 August 2006

Many laments seem to me, subtly superficial. This piece is just a hair-shy of a lament but somehow deeper and more genuine. Again, excellent work Barbara. -Tailor

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Barbara James

Barbara James

Chicago, Illinois
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