Sunday, November 15, 2015

The Edge Comments

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I'm at the edge of the ledge,
Somehow you never know.
My grievance in the balance,
Will you pull when I fall?
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Walter Dapliyan
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Lance Sigue 16 November 2015

Nice.

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Walter Dapliyan 17 November 2015

Thanks, Lance.

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Souren Mondal 15 November 2015

A very well crafted poem Walter. Thank you for sharing..

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Walter Dapliyan 17 November 2015

Thank you, Souren.

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Seema Jayaraman 15 November 2015

I am on the edge.. well worded piece of work, interesting with the twists and connects to the goodbyes with no cries.. thanks for sharing.

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Walter Dapliyan 17 November 2015

Thank you, Seema.

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