The Emptiness Poem by twina mbelwa

The Emptiness

Rating: 4.0


Out here alone in emptiness
I can hear my heartbeat pound
Out here in this emptiness
My voice in the only sound

I'm surrounded by people who cannot hear
People who don' t want to reason
People's who's lives are filled with fear
And feel cold no matter the season

I'm the only one who can still stand
The only one with enough courage
The one who can change the life on this land
And bring peace and happiness to storage

Out here alone in emptiness
I can hear my heartbeat pound
Out here in this emptiness
My voice is the only sound

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Rose 19 May 2010

Wow, I love this poem. You are a talented young lady and I can't help feeling a bit proud of you :)

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Ellie Hallie 17 May 2010

That was beautiful poetry. Thank you for the experience of reading your poem! It was truly moving, keep writing poems you have a talent!

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