Tuesday, January 12, 2016

The Emptiness Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I DIDN'T WANT to give my body to war.
I saw news footage of a fly

in a dead man's mouth. I saw a man
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Carl Adamshick
Emptiness funeral soldier Betrayal
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Paras Ali 12 January 2016

Powerful imagery. keep it up.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 12 January 2016

a very goog poem, thanks for sharing

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Nosheen Irfan 12 January 2016

Wowww..this is powerful writing. Worth many readings. Deserves a huge 10. Great work. Thanks for sharing.

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Carl Adamshick

Carl Adamshick

Toledo , OH
Carl Adamshick
Carl Adamshick
Toledo , OH
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