Friday, March 12, 2021

The Endless Fight Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've felt sorrow and pain for most of my life.
It all started when I picked up the knife.
I started slashing till my body felt right.
You didn't hear my scream in the night.
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Leann aka. Lee-Lee Pilgrim 29 October 2021

Your poem is incredible beautiful but it's sad and your right U should never stop fighting no matter how bad the pain feels because what cause U that pain in the end love will come back 10 times stronger building U up instead of breaking U down

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Hayden Clemans 19 March 2021

It sounds great

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