Wednesday, October 28, 2015

The Envelope Comments

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my heart is the envelope of her memories
the way we sank sun sitting besides waters
the possible reason to part away is a mystery
may be she wanted a better world
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Vishal Sharma
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Sanjukta Nag 29 October 2015

my heart is the envelope of her memories - very heart touching line. Life itself is a mystery, while love is just a part of it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Wonderful that heart is envelope of memory. Wise sharing done here....10

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Gajanan Mishra 28 October 2015

But making moon is not so easy, my dear poet..

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