Kathy J Anderson


The Eyes {kyrielle} - Poem by Kathy J Anderson

It all gets explained with two eyes,
All the reasons we give with words
Cannot fathom the depth nor highs,
The whys and passions so expressed.

Some are blue, some are green or brown,
They share so much, rest assured,
Having it all, yet still they frown
With whys and passions so expressed.

The look of you is more than shared,
It is a puzzle that's explained
When you see into pools of care,
The whys and passions so expressed.


Comments about The Eyes {kyrielle} by Kathy J Anderson

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (2/8/2008 4:52:00 PM)

    I naturally, didn't like this one that much.
    Your rhyme is still there but while you can
    end a verse anyway you choose. Remember,
    there is always someone who must read what
    you write. The last sounds of a verse echo
    through a poem. These lines must have a
    sound that the human ear finds pleasing.
    Unfortunately, your ending lines here do not.

    I still love your work.
    Greenwolfe 1962
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  • Roger Cornish (1/13/2008 11:29:00 AM)

    This is very good. short but to the point. I like the simple rhyme and the idea it conveys.
    The power of a look........
    Roger.x
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 13, 2008



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