The Fallen Soldier Poem by Branden Hidalgo

The Fallen Soldier

Rating: 4.9


Fallen Soldier All Alone
Fallen Soldier Far From Home.
Trickling Down His Face A Tear,
Forgetting How It Feels To Fear
Death And All It's Fate And Glory.
Now It's Here, No Need To Worry.

Fallen Soldier All Alone
Fallen Soldier Far From Home
He's One Of Those They'll All Forget;
The Life He Lived, The Goals He Set,
The Ones He Loved, The Ones Who Wait
To See His Nearly Forgotten Face.

Fallen Soldier All Alone
Fallen Soldier Far From Home
Now Breathing's Just A Waste Of Breath
And Living's Just A Waste Of Death
As He Searches For A New Address;
A Brand New Home Free Of Loneliness.

Fallen Soldier All Alone
Fallen Soldier Far From Home
Lying Motionless On The Ground,
The Battle Raging All Around.
For Now He Is Not All Alone.
This Fallen Soldier Is Welcomed Home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Corey Trammel 14 May 2008

hey dude, awsome poem. i hope you dont mind, but i kinda took the first 4 lines of the poem and tried to recreate it. that was before i saw the rest of it, and realized mine doesnt really compare. but this is what i got.... Fallen Soldier all alone, Fallen Soldier far from home Trickling down his face a tear Forgetting how it feels to fear Thinking back to home his dear The only one he holds sincere Wondering how things could go so sour Wanting only her his dieing hour Knowing things couldn't be the same Lieing there feeling alone and lame With multiple shotwounds throughout his chest Begging his comrades to put him to rest His dieing breath he feels her kiss Wanting only one last wish To be with her and nothing else... i kept your poem in mind when i went to basic training and wrote the rest there about a girl i was with...but once again, mine doesnt even compare to yours, great work!

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Eric Novacek 03 January 2008

Soldiers will always be at home as long as those back home never forget...or at least this soldier will

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Gijun Seong 04 September 2007

This Poem Is Great! You Seriously Need To Write Another One!

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Ashley Root 15 June 2007

Wow! That is an amazing poem! Great job!

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Anthony Richko 15 May 2007

Well I have to say that this poem is best I have read in a long long time. You should definetly write another one. You have a great talent

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Arbeena pathan 12 November 2017

After reading this poem I was feeling proud of the soldiers....so nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2009

Fallen Soldier All Alone Fallen Soldier Far From Home Lying Motionless On The Ground, The Battle Raging All Around. For Now He Is Not All Alone. This Fallen Soldier Is Welcomed Home..yes such honour is for our soldiers who lay downtheir lives for our well being and safety....brave soldiers you are not alone inthis world...we, , countrymencare and love you....lovely poem...10 read mine territorial integrity...bullet proof... martyrs

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Ashley Ridihalgh 16 February 2009

This was the most amazing poem i have ever read. You....I cant even say how I feel about this poem.

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Andriana Londono 10 June 2008

yo awsoem poem i so got inspired to write about a soldier. your poem i so real, you could tell you put your heart in to that poem

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