Sunday, September 13, 2009

The Falling Man (9/11) Comments

Rating: 5.0

And then he jumped

In the moments before he jumped
A calmness settled over him the likes of which he had never known
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Judith Evans
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This shows such empathy for another person in distress and the last lines are stunning! To have an ending like this wraps up a great poem. 10 love Karin

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Diana Van Den Berg 15 September 2009

What compassionate insight into another's soul you have shown in this amazing poem, Judith! Welcome to Poemhunter! I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Sue S. 13 September 2009

I'm almost speechless - the irony of the last line. I'll give it a 10 - in fact, I'll take it as a favourite

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