The Feelings Of A New Life Poem by Dona Bhadra

The Feelings Of A New Life

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I am just a tiny dot,
In the world of a crowded lot.
I am just in an innocent cry,
Finding the answer to the question why.
Nobody is there to understand me yet,
But the feelings of me are always there.
There are many things to say,
To the people whom I meet each day,
But they don't understand me
Like my mother who understands;
Each word in my innocent cry.
That's the reason why I stay in the lap of her,
Even in the crowed lot I am precious for her.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first poem which expresses the sayings of a new life. This poem implies the reason of a child not wanting to leave her mother.This is the reason child would give to justify his deep connection with his mother.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indranil Bhaduri 22 June 2013

Beautiful...amazing and relevant feelings of a child. Keep writing.. need more.

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