The First Love Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Quite an interesting poem. It begins with the suspense of a crime thriller and ends with the victory of a metaphor which develops in the guise of a romantic affair. I love it. Thanks.

An excellent poem on maiden love! I have also written a poem under the same title. You may find time to read my poem, " The First Love" . Top marks for this beautiful poem!