Tuesday, May 23, 2006

The First Time Is The Last Time Comments

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i dont kno what to feel
everything in the room looks plastic
all the words fell from his mouth
like petals of iris unfolding
but not as pretty
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Camilla Manda Vee
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Kee Thampi 23 May 2006

A feeling of guilt and fear comes over me, I begin to think of how dumb the action of self harm was. I wish to keep the way you write simple and humple but craft and talent show shines

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David Gerardino 23 May 2006

Camilla, great poem, , , , , , , , , ,

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Camilla Manda Vee

Camilla Manda Vee

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