Monday, November 3, 2014

The Flower Comments

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In the wind, it sways so gently.
Looking up, it stays contently
In one place, roots growing deep:
Joyfulness, for us to keep.
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S.C. Ouel
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

well rhymed but at concluding you put the darkness of life- ut then winter comes one day, And the flowers wilt, and die away. nice thank you

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