Friday, January 22, 2016

The Flowers Of My Youth Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flowers of my youth that flickered and smiled back then
Nowadays are no more; they will never pass before me again
All that I wish them to come back; to stay; to tempt and then fly
What is this world delight? Vanished, evaporated into the vaults of the sky
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Roseann Shawiak 24 January 2016

Intensely and vibrantly filled with emotion that carries the reader into a land of melancholy, yet still seeing the beauty that has been left behind. Tender and gentle feelings being felt, as your words fill my mind with a sorrowful symphony that touches me deeply, all the way to my soul. Fantastic heartfelt poem, thank you so much for sharing. RoseAnn

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