lochlan packer

Rookie (20/05/1995 / Australia)

The Forbidden Angel - Poem by lochlan packer

These wounds i stitch
as the pain comes back
my body begins to Twitch
But the strength i lack fight them back

so now fear my rage
as it had become more refined
so i take my thoughts to the page
by an angel of death its has been signed

so here i say my final goodbye
i look to see if this is my last fight
i then see a plain in which i lie
an angel you became so with your care the stars brighten.

Alas maybe a new path ban be chosen
for i may still find hope.
So in you're beautiful eyes my hate is frozen.
Maybe i can turn you to an angel of tender hope.


Comments about The Forbidden Angel by lochlan packer

  • Titi Dale (3/21/2013 7:10:00 PM)


    This is a good one, Lochlan! May your angel follow your footsteps, always. I like this poem: -) (Report) Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (2/11/2013 9:32:00 PM)


    I take my thoughts to the page. good one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 14, 2013


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