Wednesday, April 3, 2019

The Force Comments

Rating: 4.5

They say I am powerless,
Because the force is concentrated in the current and shadow.
Put it into iron and steel,
Then follow a road until it is dark.
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Yilong. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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