Wednesday, December 31, 2014

The Fur-Tree Was Born In The Forest By Raisa Kudasheva Comments

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The fur-tree was born in the forest,
She grew up in the forest,
She was slim in a summer and a winter, was green.
She was slim in a summer and a winter, was green.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 December 2014

As a rule, I am not a subscriber or practice of repetitive lines in closing out a stanza...However, you make this work here quite well, and compliments of your keen display of constructional poetic acumen...these repetitions belong and in effect, make this poem sing....Solid penning ~FjR~

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