Thursday, April 26, 2007

The Game Of Rape (Aka: My Father's Love) Comments

Rating: 5.0

This hate, it’s leading you astray; farther
and farther it begins to take you away
from the daughter you once loved and gave.
Gave her away to the dark side of
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Scarlett Treat 26 April 2007

The most hopeful line in your whole poem is 'she releases herself from HIS prison of hate.' What an outstanding feat of courage, of sheer bravery...to release yourself from the prison of another's hatred. Strong writing in this poem.

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