Wednesday, December 16, 2015

The Ghost Of My Past Comments

Rating: 5.0

My journey has started an excursion of doubt,
It will open the door of my dubious freedom,
Without linking my past, with my future,
Though I know it is not a place I want to end in.
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Chinedu Dike 29 January 2016

An insightful melancholic train of thoughts depicting abusive and traumatized childhood, elegantly penned in poetic diction from the heart with conviction. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing Deduson. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kenneth Maswabi 16 December 2015

The art of writing is clearly visible in this poem.I have to read it again and again...the pureness of words captures the pain and tribulations of one's past. I love this poem.Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 December 2015

good writing, I like it most, thanks.

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