The Gift Poem by Leslie Alexis

The Gift

Rating: 5.0


Once upon a time
There lived a man who cared
And on an evening lime
He found a gift and shared

Shared the treasured gift
A water sweeter than wine
That gives the soul a lift
And fruit from every vine

And fruit from every vine
Who, the gift, received
But so many declined
That the sharer grieved

They who refused were poor,
Their reason he could not see…
Their own lack they did not know
Refusing riches given free

The treasured gift he had:
A water that matures to gold
And joy- you’re forever glad!
And this and all he told.

They refused because of pride:
Having not, and not seeing the need
They who within such ways abide
Suffers a greater curse than greed

The man from once upon a time
Continued to offer the gift
Sometimes pushy sometimes sublime
But in the offer always swift.

Copyright ©2010 Leslie Alexis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yacov Mitchenko 26 April 2010

You show tighter control here, Leslie. I'm not sure if the 5th stanza is necessary, but aside from that, good job. Yes, sometimes people don't accept gifts because the gifts are so lofty as to make people feel envious or inferior.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 April 2010

Gifted poem Leslie We all are in quest of such fab gift. …forget to look inside Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 22 April 2010

this is a nice piece dear leslie, ..the ideas are well penned...it makes mje glad reading this...very nice, hope the gift is handed to me and i'll promise, it will be forever a treasure...owww...smileeeee

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