I know a girl from Cebu City
I have never met her but I know of her
through her lover… a much older man
who lives in my city.
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money and romance....disturbing and powerful, this one left me a bit unnerved, but i think it reflects human nature quite well. If i read it right, Im assuming the man essentially 'bought' her loving heh...kind of like we calculate how 'nice a dinner' it will cost to buy our loving, while the woman was left feeling used. excellent 10/10
So good a poem is almost beyond contemplation. wonderful to read, thanks -nkuja
This man must be very lonely - I think I understand where he is coming from, for him it's worth risking it - for the oppertunity of not having to be alone for a while. Excellent Poem!
To give love and a relationship a retail price is putting the wrong foot forward eyes and hearts so often swayed by the golden paths of western society 10 thanks Yuri
It is a wonderful poem derived from wit and experience. I like and added 10.