The Girl In My Life Comments
But I wonder, how gracefully you spun the cob-web of lies,
You wrapped the most severe heartbreaks inside all the ' hi 's!
Such as a baby kicks inside the mother's womb, you always kicked from inside on my heart's wall,
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Kickinf of wall of your hearts by your beloved makes it a very endearing poem. Loved the write
Thank you so much sir for your kind look at my work. glad you liked it. ๐
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3/11/2026 5:11:04 AM # 1.0.0
Burned brightly at first, but the temporary light didn't last I reached for your next poem getting inspired by your first poem..as I fell in love with this emerging poet. But what next? When am I going to read the net dear? However,10+++ for this lovely lovelorn poem. Regards. Your fellow poet, Subhas
Thanks Subhash sir ๐ I am working on my next work. I will be producing it here soon๐