Thursday, October 13, 2011

The Girl That No One Knew Comments

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You say she is happy
but really she's not
you say she always has a smile
that lasts awhile
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Bleeding Willow
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Bleeding Willow 15 October 2011

thank you guys this poem really ment alot to me when i written it ive been threw alot an ur comments will help me :)

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Marcus Mckinley 14 October 2011

what she projects is what she wants other people see. if only to fit in or avoid inquisition. the truth lies within her to be true to who she really is not who people want her to be. nicely written

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Steven Dart 14 October 2011

Theres some pain in your soul woman.Keep using it. I like that when reading your writing I feel like I am looking right in you. It's so raw.

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Fairie Helper 13 October 2011

She is not always there. Because sometimes she loses control. She has to learn, when do I have to 'check out' from life. Having a stable life, is all about management. If I wasn't able to manage myself, I would lose control completely because of the sorroundings. Although. If you need help. It's up to you to strife for it.

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Stefanie Fontker 13 October 2011

The perception a person has of another, usually dramatically differs from that individual's perception of themself. Lovely writing, this is very thought provoking.

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