Wednesday, March 11, 2015

The Guinea Pig And The Green Balloon Comments

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I approached the luminous stranger who came to me
from darkness in a gown of lettuce leaves, in a velvet
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Oni Buchanan
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Bri Edwards 11 August 2016

certainly interesting. oh! now i reread the title! ! ! ! that helps heaps to understand the poem! ! ! ok, in light of the title, i read the poem again. i hadn't understood the cage before, or the teeth. now it is pretty clear what happened, and i DO like reality poems mostly, or at least ones i can understand. this goes to MyPoemList. but, DO guinea pigs really have such thoughts? ? why not? ! ;) bri

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