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The Haunting Heist

Rating: 3.5

Love once more
But not as two,
Love me us,
Love me you.

There and back
Again once more,
Lost my mind
In Merlin’s lore.

Floating down
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Sandra Osborne 22 December 2004

Alan, I added: A quiet tempest, A Rolling sea. Cascading Cannon, A stinging bee. What do you think? ? And thanks so much for the advice. :)

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Allan James Saywell 22 December 2004

You woman love love, i supose that makes us different, men love logic you speak of love quite well, your poem is orderly it has a certain flow BUT IT NEEDS, a small explosion in the middle to bring it to life I cant tell you how to do that, it comes with time, you will have to be patient Warm regards AJS

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