Wednesday, March 12, 2008

The Hole In The Bathroom Wall Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cottage was old, it needed some work
The walls were of crumbling stone,
The windows, like eyes in a tumbledown Kirk
Were staring, like sockets of bone;
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David Lewis Paget
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Chuck Audette 13 March 2008

Wonderful poetic flow and build-up of tension to the climax of this piece. Wow! -chuck

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Ernestine Northover 12 March 2008

Excellent story and so well produced. A wonderful read and a pleasure to find. Loved it lots. Love Ernestine XXX

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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