The Hooked Fisherman Poem by Chris Tuscano Harris

The Hooked Fisherman

Rating: 5.0


A mellifluous patter broke the silence in my mind

Speckles of rain graced my forehead as the clouds began to unwind

A bucolic trance set the ambiance as my rod began to quiver

Alas a bite, my hands began to shiver


An Ineffable feeling gripped me with pleasure

The moist droplets on my eyelashes glistened like treasure

A petrichor fragrance explodes through the air

This moment in time not a thing do I care


A sussorous melody as the heavens hit the lake

If I fell asleep I wish for this each time I wake

The rain isn't bad it is beautiful and pure

Excuse me a moment look there goes my lure

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Vaughan Jones 21 March 2014

I was reading this and thinking of the times when I've sat in the sun and made myself comfortable. Out comes the wine and sandwiches. Then Oh Lor! I face the inconvenience of having a bite. I don't know why, but when I reached the end of this poem, I had an uncontrollable urge to laugh. Gotta go now :) Excuse me a moment look there goes my lure

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 February 2014

A sublime take on the fisherman's hook! Creative wording and impressive diction. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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