Stuart Doggett


The Hoop Castle - Poem by Stuart Doggett

Lets go ride the invisible rocket
And say hello to the sun,
It’s hidden down the invisible path
Where we used to run,
Beyond the pink and emerald maze,
Picked out in box and rose
And the fountain where my doggie fell
And banged his poor sweet nose,
Far from that scary wood
With bears that haunt it’s depths,
Past the little garden we made,
Up and down the curling steps
And behind the icicle waterfall,
Frozen by Jack’s breath
Hides our invisible rocket
Fuelled by ice cream and pie,
To take us to meet the sun,
To take us sky-high.

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  • (3/27/2006 3:03:00 PM)


    The flow in this one is truly something to be admired, coupled by the fact that your words are so playful.Amazing and well worth the read and a big fat 'TEN', Love Duncan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 27, 2006



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