Monday, January 28, 2008

The Hunter Comments

Rating: 5.0

An adventure unfolds
deep in the wood.
A child walks a track
were a tiger once stood.
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Mark Boyle
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Ann Beard 29 January 2008

Well done, a very pleasent read.

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P B May Lyn 29 January 2008

Like the form...! beginning=attention middle=excitement ending=empathy

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