Friday, November 18, 2022

The Kite Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sailed through the sky
To those clouds up high
And flew without wings
With currents of winds
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Rhuta Joshi
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D.N. Rebb 19 November 2022

it has a 'the grass isn't always greener on the other side' kind of vibe. I loved it!

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David Wood 18 November 2022

I've done all in your poem in gliders. Great poem and a good 10*

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