The Lake Poem by Jason Doyle

The Lake

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My mind is a lake of ripples
Caused by past pebbles
That lap on the shore of my consciousness.
She was a rock.

My stormy sea of electricity
Charged by her smile
Sometimes gives a shock
And the storms compile
To remind me of all I never had.
It’s still so pure and beautiful.

Her eyes have the power to lull
The tempest of the serious
And all of that away from us
Make her laugh and you will see
Why that rock’s ripples still belabour me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 17 January 2009

Life like the lake is full of ripples

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Michael Gale 17 January 2009

Great imagery here! God bless all poets-MJG.

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