Thursday, October 1, 2009

The Last Of Me. Comments

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How can I live with this feeling everyday
just thinking about it gives me so much pain
stabbing through my memories like an edgy knife
am I going to live with it all my life
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Pearlivia Alana
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Shogunoka Ledesma III 01 October 2009

Oh my...I really don't know what to say. You really have a gift of words. And what bothers me is that you really expressed how you truly feel. Don't lose hope. This too shall pass as all things do. Life can be cruel but it's never like that all the time. And I would love to read more of your poems. And I hope next time, the lines would inspire.

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