The Leopard And The Mouse Comments

Original and interesting... This poem will be ideal for this video... Thank you David for all your kind words... Tsira

Not bad David, but this reads more like an article in a kids newspaper rather than a poem. lines like cheeky little mouse, filled with dismay... if this is aimed at kids then its not to bad, but as mentioned, for me, it is less a poem, more an excerpt from a paper

thanks for sharing it must have been amazing to see