Monday, January 14, 2008

The Life (Alternate Rhyming) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The birds in the sky
Inspire you to take a flight.
Drive off all heavy memories
And make your heart light.
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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary
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Howard Johnson 14 January 2008

Very nice and peaceful, I like the last line, Excellent Jyoti! !

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Elizabeth T. 14 January 2008

An astonishing poem this is and written with fascinating fluency! Great job! I absolutly love it!

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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