Thursday, September 25, 2008

~the Life He Remembers~ Comments

Rating: 4.5

He stares at the blood

Wondering where it came from
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 25 September 2008

good strong beginning...and excellent engaging way all thru..ending a little sudden though..you were telling such a good story one desires to hear more of it in the last verse.a 9 for excellence of theme

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Sara Sulja

Sara Sulja

Windsor Ontario
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