~the Life He Remembers~ Poem by Sara Sulja

~the Life He Remembers~

Rating: 4.5


He stares at the blood

Wondering where it came from

Staring at the blood

And as he stares at the blood

His life flashes before his eyes

He remembers when life was happy

When life was carefree

When he was a kid

Playtime was a favourite

Toys were a must

In that carefree and happy world

But not anymore

He stares at the blood

Wondering where it came from

Staring at the blood

And as he stares at the blood

His life flashes before his eyes

And as he was growing up

Into a handsome teenager

A lot of things changed

Girls were a favourite

Friends were a must

In that complicated teen life

But not anymore

He stares at the blood

Wondering where it came from

Staring at the blood

And as he stares at the blood

His life flashes before his eyes

And as he progressed later on in life

Problems began to happen

Starting soon enough

Drugs were a favourite

Alcohol was a must

Girls were there still

But not anymore

He stares at the blood

Wondering where it came from

Staring at the blood

And as he stares at the blood

His life flashes before his eyes

Nope, not anymore

Life wasn’t working out for him

So here’s the theme song

For the end of time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 25 September 2008

good strong beginning...and excellent engaging way all thru..ending a little sudden though..you were telling such a good story one desires to hear more of it in the last verse.a 9 for excellence of theme

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Sara Sulja

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Windsor Ontario
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